I dont often share this stuff. I LOVE to write, but it's ALOT more mature than I can put up here. SO....I'll drop one off that isnt bad. It's just one quick scene. Tell me what yall think.
John looked everywhere for someplace safe, or just to hide. He didn't know what was going on, only that people were looking for something and they had no qualms about killing to get it. He had made his way across the camp and saw the light by one of the shower cabins. Behind him he saw they were getting closer. Their were four of them, dressed in black jumpsuits, carrying military gear and weapons. They had the type of gear you'd see in an action movie, or videogame.
Slowly John made his way over to the showers, trying to stay out of sight. He knew his grandparents and his dad were in his grandparents house outside the camp. His dad would know what to do, he always did. He made it over to the showers, making sure he turned off the lights inside. He went to the last shower stall and jumped on the bench inside. Looking out the window he could see his dad's old truck in his grandparents driveway. He heard voices coming close but didn't recognize them.
"Is this where you saw that kid go?"
"Yeah, I saw him go in but not out. Did they get the target?"
"Getting her now. Let's tie up this loose end and bang out."
John heard them come in. They started kicking open doors in the pitch black darkness, shouting things like "clear" or "moving". John could feel someone in the stall next to him when suddenly everything went crazy. He saw a flash and heard, no felt a bang....
Wes had been following these dudes for a while. They were good, but sloppy. He didn't know who they were or what they wanted but suddenly he felt better than he had in years. His old skills were coming back. He watched them follow John and then enter the shower area. He had seen their NVG's, because he had a pair too. He let them follow John in and when they were all in he grabbed two flashbangs and waited for the right time.
It sounded like they'd cleared the building and so in he went. He tossed both flashbangs in one after the other. When they exploded he rushed in. Scanning from left to right. The first thing that lined up in his sight picture was not friendly. His Kimber was in his hands and firing before he even realized it. Two shots center mass. The next guy was the same way. Wes dropped his mag as the screaming started to die down putting a fresh mag in the pistol. Wes pulled out his DB as he grabbed a guy and rammed the blade in his chest. He felt the blade stop and knew they had armor.
"CRAP!!!" Wes said as he went for a softer target, under the armpit. He stabbed several times until he felt the bad guy go down. The last guy was coming around and Wes emptied the gun into him. As he started coming down from the fight he saw movement and turned to see John coming out of the last stall. Grabbing John by the arm he said