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When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« on: December 22, 2009, 10:59:34 PM »
 I dont often share this stuff. I LOVE to write, but it's ALOT more mature than I can put up here. SO....I'll drop one off that isnt bad. It's just one quick scene. Tell me what yall think.

 John looked everywhere for someplace safe, or just to hide. He didn't know what was going on, only that people were looking for something and they had no qualms about killing to get it. He had made his way across the camp and saw the light by one of the shower cabins. Behind him he saw they were getting closer. Their were four of them, dressed in black jumpsuits, carrying military gear and weapons. They had the type of gear you'd see in an action movie, or videogame.

Slowly John made his way over to the showers, trying to stay out of sight. He knew his grandparents and his dad were in his grandparents house outside the camp. His dad would know what to do, he always did. He made it over to the showers, making sure he turned off the lights inside. He went to the last shower stall and jumped on the bench inside. Looking out the window he could see his dad's old truck in his grandparents driveway. He heard voices coming close but didn't recognize them.
"Is this where you saw that kid go?"
"Yeah, I saw him go in but not out. Did they get the target?"
"Getting her now. Let's tie up this loose end and bang out."

John heard them come in. They started kicking open doors in the pitch black darkness, shouting things like "clear" or "moving". John could feel someone in the stall next to him when suddenly everything went crazy. He saw a flash and heard, no felt a bang....

Wes had been following these dudes for a while. They were good, but sloppy. He didn't know who they were or what they wanted but suddenly he felt better than he had in years. His old skills were coming back. He watched them follow John and then enter the shower area. He had seen their NVG's, because he had a pair too. He let them follow John in and when they were all in he grabbed two flashbangs and waited for the right time.

It sounded like they'd cleared the building and so in he went. He tossed both flashbangs in one after the other. When they exploded he rushed in. Scanning from left to right. The first thing that lined up in his sight picture was not friendly. His Kimber was in his hands and firing before he even realized it. Two shots center mass. The next guy was the same way. Wes dropped his mag as the screaming started to die down putting a fresh mag in the pistol. Wes pulled out his DB as he grabbed a guy and rammed the blade in his chest. He felt the blade stop and knew they had armor.
"CRAP!!!" Wes said as he went for a softer target, under the armpit. He stabbed several times until he felt the bad guy go down. The last guy was coming around and Wes emptied the gun into him. As he started coming down from the fight he saw movement and turned to see John coming out of the last stall. Grabbing John by the arm he said
"Let's go!"
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #1 on: December 22, 2009, 11:16:10 PM »
wow that is cool dude...I like it...
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #2 on: December 23, 2009, 08:50:19 AM »
You're right. That is epicly epic. So epicly epic, I epicly want some more, epicly please?



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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #3 on: December 23, 2009, 09:07:09 AM »
The plot is a a group of dudes kidnap the daughter of a VIP from a girl scout camp.

John is a guy in his teens, his grandparents run the place.
Wes is based on me....Wesley being my middle name. He's a former Marine whose family was killed in a horrific car wreck.

Infact the whole story is based on me, it takes place in Florida where my stepmom's parents ran an actual girl scout camp for the evil cookie peddlers.

Once I get my laptop back I'll look at getting more done. Thanks for the good words guys!
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #4 on: December 23, 2009, 11:58:10 AM »
this was pretty cool Sean. Short, but the scene was pictured in my head.

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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #5 on: December 23, 2009, 12:50:42 PM »
Infact the whole story is based on me, it takes place in Florida where my stepmom's parents ran an actual girl scout camp for the evil cookie peddlers.

I....can't tell if this is serious or not. Evil Girlscouts?
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #6 on: December 23, 2009, 01:08:00 PM »
I....can't tell if this is serious or not. Evil Girlscouts?

haha! i was gonna say...?

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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #7 on: December 23, 2009, 01:27:55 PM »
I'm quite serious about evil cookie peddlers. Sitting in wait....Then they strike! Outside grocery stores, the local mall, or even at your front door.
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #8 on: December 23, 2009, 01:41:58 PM »
I'm quite serious about evil cookie peddlers. Sitting in wait....Then they strike! Outside grocery stores, the local mall, or even at your front door.

But...I like the cookiees....
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #9 on: December 23, 2009, 01:48:09 PM »
But...I like the cookiees....

the cookies are great... but it's a front, Marco...

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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #10 on: December 23, 2009, 02:57:43 PM »
They dip their cookies in poison...


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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #11 on: December 23, 2009, 03:09:46 PM »
Dude, the cookies are great that's why they are evil!!!
The  purpose of fighting is to win. There is no possible victory in
defense. The sword is more important than the shield, and skill is more
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Drake and I agreed on something. Somebody get the camera out to capture the moment.

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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #12 on: December 23, 2009, 03:18:25 PM »
Dude, the cookies are great that's why they are evil!!!

Greatness is Evil...?

no, no, no... you have the equation wrong: Girls (Girlscouts)=Evil

*sigh* i guess i have to get the ol' equation out again....


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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #13 on: December 23, 2009, 04:42:05 PM »
YUP!!!
The  purpose of fighting is to win. There is no possible victory in
defense. The sword is more important than the shield, and skill is more
important than either. The final weapon is the brain. All else is supplemental.

Drake and I agreed on something. Somebody get the camera out to capture the moment.

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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #14 on: December 23, 2009, 08:32:04 PM »
I love that proof... and I like the story
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #15 on: March 15, 2010, 05:58:47 PM »
*Cough* huh?? >.> Hey Sean have anymore to ost u??

Sum of these Keye's don't OK aaaggh dont judge me!

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Ok that keyboard dosent work lol
« Last Edit: March 16, 2010, 06:43:31 PM by CT-1199 Oronk »
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #16 on: July 14, 2010, 02:29:02 PM »
Cough WRITE MORE!! :D I like eet
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #17 on: August 01, 2010, 11:41:35 PM »
Sorry vod'ika, training the nations most feared warriors takes time. I'm working on it.
The  purpose of fighting is to win. There is no possible victory in
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Drake and I agreed on something. Somebody get the camera out to capture the moment.

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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #18 on: August 01, 2010, 11:49:17 PM »
Kandosii ^_^
My writing would benefit so much if I had that sort of real experience.

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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #19 on: August 02, 2010, 11:24:53 AM »
Sorry vod'ika, training the nations most feared warriors takes time. I'm working on it.

Ever think of keeping a journal of that, changing names, and then making it a book?


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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #20 on: August 02, 2010, 10:45:24 PM »
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The  purpose of fighting is to win. There is no possible victory in
defense. The sword is more important than the shield, and skill is more
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Re: When mods write stuff....Real life stories from Sean
« Reply #21 on: April 20, 2011, 11:22:28 PM »
Sean,

This is epic and you're right the cookies are great but evil because you have to wait a whole year for them to come back.
just imagine the money they'd make if they'd sell from net stores. they'd be millionairs or better? :)

Would love to read more when you have time.

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