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Eparavu

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Savior
« on: July 30, 2010, 07:05:35 PM »
Baleet!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2010, 07:07:02 PM »
DEL
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Re: Savior
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2010, 07:09:32 PM »
 :D :P
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Re: Savior
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2010, 08:14:46 PM »
Now you see it
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Re: Savior
« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2010, 09:48:46 PM »
That was great Bevi!    Part four?!!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2010, 10:26:40 PM »
Someday :p

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Re: Savior
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2010, 10:38:21 PM »
...This was awesome. Eloquently literary, with no holds barred.

In short: you win.
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Re: Savior
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2010, 10:43:47 PM »
i like it.


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Re: Savior
« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2011, 07:19:12 PM »
Now you don't!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #9 on: March 31, 2011, 08:53:30 PM »
Ninja text!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2011, 01:03:42 PM »
G'bye
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Re: Savior
« Reply #11 on: June 13, 2011, 01:07:20 PM »
Sigh. It occurs to me that a piece of literature is merely the transcript of one person talking to their self for a length of time. It is the presence of readers that makes it not crazy.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #12 on: June 13, 2011, 01:35:16 PM »
Absolutely awesome

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Re: Savior
« Reply #13 on: June 13, 2011, 03:20:05 PM »
Very good, very dark.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #14 on: June 13, 2011, 03:26:01 PM »
Very good, very dark.
That's what I like to hear XD

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Re: Savior
« Reply #15 on: June 13, 2011, 03:31:29 PM »
I'll say it again, then:

Very good, very dark.

Seriously. I have put on a notification thing on it. That's how good and dark I think it is.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #16 on: June 13, 2011, 05:58:12 PM »
Beviin, I know I've already commented elsewhere, but this was absolutely phenomenal.
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-- KOTOR (1 and 2)
-- SWTOR
-- Terraria
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Re: Savior
« Reply #17 on: June 18, 2011, 09:17:47 PM »
Well there's only one part left for this'un Laney, but it sets up a novel length story. I invite you to browse my original work at your leisure, if you seek the link in my signature.



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Re: Savior
« Reply #18 on: June 19, 2011, 09:20:14 AM »
I like your story's. There very engaging. It's like you can have an emotional bond with the characters very quickly, something that most books and films need to be good.  ;)

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Re: Savior
« Reply #19 on: June 19, 2011, 11:12:20 AM »
Really...?
Mereel says that too.

Huh...

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