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Savior
« on: July 30, 2010, 07:05:35 PM »
Baleet!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2010, 07:07:02 PM »
DEL
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Re: Savior
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2010, 07:09:32 PM »
 :D :P
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Re: Savior
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2010, 08:14:46 PM »
Now you see it
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Re: Savior
« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2010, 09:48:46 PM »
That was great Bevi!    Part four?!!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2010, 10:26:40 PM »
Someday :p

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Re: Savior
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2010, 10:38:21 PM »
...This was awesome. Eloquently literary, with no holds barred.

In short: you win.
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Re: Savior
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2010, 10:43:47 PM »
i like it.


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Re: Savior
« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2011, 07:19:12 PM »
Now you don't!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #9 on: March 31, 2011, 08:53:30 PM »
Ninja text!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2011, 01:03:42 PM »
G'bye
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Re: Savior
« Reply #11 on: June 13, 2011, 01:07:20 PM »
Sigh. It occurs to me that a piece of literature is merely the transcript of one person talking to their self for a length of time. It is the presence of readers that makes it not crazy.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #12 on: June 13, 2011, 01:35:16 PM »
Absolutely awesome

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Re: Savior
« Reply #13 on: June 13, 2011, 03:20:05 PM »
Very good, very dark.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #14 on: June 13, 2011, 03:26:01 PM »
Very good, very dark.
That's what I like to hear XD

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Re: Savior
« Reply #15 on: June 13, 2011, 03:31:29 PM »
I'll say it again, then:

Very good, very dark.

Seriously. I have put on a notification thing on it. That's how good and dark I think it is.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #16 on: June 13, 2011, 05:58:12 PM »
Beviin, I know I've already commented elsewhere, but this was absolutely phenomenal.
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Re: Savior
« Reply #17 on: June 18, 2011, 09:17:47 PM »
Well there's only one part left for this'un Laney, but it sets up a novel length story. I invite you to browse my original work at your leisure, if you seek the link in my signature.



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Re: Savior
« Reply #18 on: June 19, 2011, 09:20:14 AM »
I like your story's. There very engaging. It's like you can have an emotional bond with the characters very quickly, something that most books and films need to be good.  ;)

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Re: Savior
« Reply #19 on: June 19, 2011, 11:12:20 AM »
Really...?
Mereel says that too.

Huh...

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« Reply #20 on: June 19, 2011, 11:23:41 AM »
Really...?

Really really.

Don't ask another question now.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #21 on: June 19, 2011, 11:25:33 AM »
Why does Joss Whedon kill off his best characters?

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« Reply #22 on: June 19, 2011, 11:30:00 AM »
Because he did. Really really really.

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« Reply #23 on: June 19, 2011, 11:31:18 AM »
WESLEYYYYYYYY

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Re: Savior
« Reply #24 on: October 05, 2011, 05:17:15 PM »
Sorry folks! That's that. If you want to see how it ends, you have to wait to buy it.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #25 on: October 05, 2011, 05:21:32 PM »
I hate you.
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Re: Savior
« Reply #26 on: October 07, 2011, 10:10:47 PM »
You love me and everything that I do.
Except for voting Democrat.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #27 on: October 08, 2011, 07:39:53 PM »
Hmph, I was raised Republician and quite Southern.
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Re: Savior
« Reply #28 on: October 08, 2011, 11:50:30 PM »
Last I checked you can't quit a heritage, Sher...
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« Reply #29 on: October 09, 2011, 12:22:00 AM »
Like crap you can't.
It's just what your ancestors did before you and where they lived. Very few of us actually have our entire reasonable history rooted in the same area. That aside, My family has voted republican on principle for generations, and that therein is my heritage. BLACK SHEEP BABY BAAAAAAAAHHHH YEAAAAH

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« Reply #30 on: October 09, 2011, 04:04:35 PM »
I'm pretty conservative, so...
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Re: Savior
« Reply #31 on: October 09, 2011, 04:29:45 PM »
So what?

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« Reply #32 on: October 09, 2011, 05:05:48 PM »
Nice fix, Sher...but I wasn't sure if you were joking...

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« Reply #33 on: October 09, 2011, 05:16:31 PM »
Gasp and shock! Conservative texans! What next, an asian that eats rice?!

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« Reply #34 on: October 09, 2011, 05:25:38 PM »
Gasp and shock! Conservative texans! What next, an asian that eats rice?!
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Re: Savior
« Reply #35 on: October 09, 2011, 05:30:15 PM »
Sorry folks! That's that. If you want to see how it ends, you have to wait to buy it.

You sorry little bastard, you didn't tell me it was Savior you got published.


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« Reply #36 on: October 09, 2011, 05:31:20 PM »
Hehe, you didn't seem that interested!
You said "Yay!" And I didn't probe to see how deep the sarcasm hole went.

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« Reply #37 on: October 09, 2011, 05:38:47 PM »
Remember after that I said a "." would be sarcasm, and "!" is a genuine exclamation.


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« Reply #38 on: October 09, 2011, 05:40:59 PM »
Well, it obviously never came up WHAT I was publishing did it.
You sad?

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« Reply #39 on: October 09, 2011, 05:51:46 PM »
No... why would you think me capable of such an emotion?


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« Reply #40 on: October 09, 2011, 06:06:39 PM »
Uh.
Are you...
emotionally impacted by the removal for public viewing.

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Re: Savior
« Reply #41 on: October 09, 2011, 06:12:41 PM »
No.


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« Reply #42 on: October 10, 2011, 07:35:49 PM »
No... why would you think me capable of such an emotion?
Because you know you tend to be cold and icy, but deep down part of you wants to feel like normal people, except you don't want to loose your intelect. So you ignore the tiny tugging emotions you feel by cutting them off untill you have to think about it before you feel it, but can still feel.
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Re: Savior
« Reply #43 on: October 10, 2011, 10:47:28 PM »
How long did it take you to think up that overly analytic response to my sarcastic comment?


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« Reply #44 on: October 11, 2011, 04:17:37 PM »
Why are we talking about sarcasm? Because it is a really fun topic.

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« Reply #45 on: November 07, 2011, 07:33:50 PM »
How long did it take you to think up that overly analytic response to my sarcastic comment?
Uh, not long at all actually. It was kinda instant.
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« Reply #46 on: November 07, 2011, 10:47:48 PM »
The necromancer in this story doesn't come until Part 2! Quit casting animate dead on this thread!

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