Can I be frank?
Okay, I know they're clones, but can we really only mange to give them recycled personalities? Almost every squad I see written has at least two of the following: Sev, Atin, Boss, Niner, Scorch.
I mean, I guess I understand, but still.
And try re-writing this sentence:
Ky'ram thought she was dumb, because of his bad history with Jedi.
Try "After his experiences with the Jedi, it was the latter."
I'm not trying to be rude, I'm just trying to help.